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Rylus

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This is my OC button by izka197

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Here's Rylus. He's my central and special persona anthropomorphic dragon alter-ego. So, I'll probably be doing more artwork of him time and again in this appearance.

His appearance, color, and element is "generally" wind-based. Height: 6' 4" He's 21 (in human years).

Bio: Rylus is a freelance mercenary who take on missions and jobs from various guilds for his source of income. At the same time, he and his particular kind are being hunted down throughout his whole world. After nearly a decade has past, while working in various jobs, Rylus is also gathering any knowledge regarding to his original homelands and finding out what has become of his home and his missing remaining family, aside from his little sister, Ari. He and his sister now resides in a guild city of Orlansya, where his human savior Garmond took them in. Like all anthropomorphics in his world, he can transform out of it into his normal "Origin Form" dragon appearance, but personally prefers not to do it.

Traits:
- Dual-wielding sword fighter
- Marksman on firearms
- A versatile individual with many options.
- Fast runner on his digitigrade legs, quick attack combos, swift evasion skills (due to being Wind-natured)
- Slight low balanced stamina
- Knows some offensive, support, and healing spells/breaths
- He's one-winged on his right: no longer able to properly fly on his own anymore, relies on his Vernier, or someone or something to give him a lift.
- Knowledgeable, cunning, good observational and perception skills about his world and surroundings.
- A decent mechanic
- A bit impatient and quick to anger
- A no-nonsense who rarely makes jokes and hardly smiles anymore.
- Daring or Risk-taking
- Protective and Trustworthy
- Free-spirited

*Side Note: The coloring just took me within a week or two. I wanted to waited about posting this piece until I finished his sister's pic. I know there are few errors somewhere that needs to be corrected, so say anything that comes to your mind.

Lineart done: 9/23/2010
Coloring/details: 4/18/2011

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This stood out to me while browsing the critqueable deviations because of the bright, bold colours and the interesting character design. You seem to have put a lot of thought into this guy with all his accessories and complicated clothing designs! Nice choices of colour too, they all go together well and compliment each other.

There are a few things however that I feel you should look out for in future drawings. His face confuses me a little because the placement of the eyes looks humanoid but the snout suggests they should be placed either side like an animal. I think the main thing which is throwing off the balance of his face is the line between the eyes to define the snout, it almost looks like it's been added as an afterthought. From this angle that defining line would be further to the viewer's right and would partly obscure his left eye.

Also...is he meant to only have one wing? Not sure if I should critique the missing wing because it might be part of his design!